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depend 1 only your cell_f by ~aco24:iconaco24:

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+= ‘look at him go’;
    she said to her cell(ƒ);
this deviation.
a silent gesture;
F
  A
    L
      L
×→1 { in };

and in that short stint of ?time
where the words hung in the sky like satellites
so            far,
so            quiet.

an entire future,
    our::~dream() { }

was deconstructed
    before eyes like glass,

infinite

in var %iable decisions led us all to rest,
        reflect
and
        react.

for(this; ; )
    I = I = I = will never depend on you again;
©2008-2009 ~aco24
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i dabble in poetry sometimes..
most recent piece, stirred by a recent experience
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=CQuake:iconCQuake: May 9, 2008, 12:14:03 AM
it's marvelous!!!!

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What in the name of Are You There, God? It's Me, Margaret were you thinking?
~get-shiny:iconget-shiny: May 9, 2008, 4:54:53 PM
i dont really know what all that other stuff is for in the poem...and i dont really care...^^; gives me lots of stuff to look at and ponder...

i really like this poem even though i've never seen some thing like it in my entire life before...it be cool to see more poetry from you ^^

:sun:

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~aco24:iconaco24: May 9, 2008, 9:09:13 PM
:) i'm happy you could still find something in this for you to ponder about.

The basis of this poem is that it is what people call; 'new media' - or e-poetry.

It doesn't follow traditional prose, in fact - i don't consider myself all that good at writing traditional poems. I study a lot about new media, so its no surprise that i find inspiration in it when i create.

all of the weird symbols strewn throughout the poem are lines of code - programming language(s) syntax. so with that being said, this poem reads two ways (and for some, even more than 2)

1) It reads for face value, where the words are the medium.
2) and it also reads as a programmer would understand syntax and program flow.

other ways it can be read is a combination of the two, and with indentation taken into consideration when reading for a better feel of how it flows.

cell(ƒ;); is a double entendre. it can be read as 'self' and cell (f) -- meaning a variable of f used as an identifier for any given cell, both are closely tied together as our "self" is composed of 'cells' :)

i wont explain/pick apart the rest of the poem for you (and other readers), i leave that up to you to analyze and pick apart.


as for more poems from me;
when inspiration strikes, late at night while I'm lying in bed, thinking that which I really feel -- I'll write again.

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summon unreali.gojira
~get-shiny:iconget-shiny: May 9, 2008, 9:20:12 PM
^^ thanks for the insight. it would be cool to learn the language you used ^^; but i'm too lazy to look it up...i'll stick with words personally...but i cant wait to read more from you *pauses* it was really cool...

:sun:

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